DPS

This is my first Double page spread, this version however I made edits too.

First of all the picture was not big enough, feedback suggested the picture should run all the way down the page. This would make the artist stand out more and emphasise the genre of music and attract readers attention.

The text was another issue, although the masthead was fine, feedback suggested it should be made straight which would help the readers to read it clearly. It was suggested that when it was on the slant it would annoy the readers and didn't show normal magazine conventions.

For example:

The text here is all straight and is easily legible.






There was also the issue that my actual context was not following the conventions of a normal magazine article, with this in mind I changed all the text, using the same idea.